More Proofing

Today I was hoping that I would spend some time shooting the video for this.  I may still do some of that, I don't really know.  But what happened was that when I was thinking about doing that, I was trying to figure out a way that I could get the copy from the Twine HTML file, to a printed version.

I ended up finding a way with the proofing tools to get a format that was relatively easy to bring in to LibreOffice to modify, and then print.  

This lead me to feel I might as well do some proofing.

So, this is after doing what I can with how things have ended up with having spent the time doing that proofing.  It's slowly coming together.